The Official Writing Challenge
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09/17/09
Really enjoyed this one, had a nice ebb and flow. Good job.
09/21/09
Love this:

"The days flow, and we get to spend more time with our grandchildren. Our future shines back at us through their eyes."

I can't wait to have that expereince myself! But I'll have a few more years before I get to have this kind of fun...enjoyed reading your version of what is ahead as a grandparent!

09/24/09
Mary, congratulations on your placement with this story. Your MC sounded so genuine and had wise words to share.
09/25/09
I liked the comfortable, easy feel of this entry...the idea of still having things to do , but at a much slower pace. Congratulations on your Highly Commended placement.