The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 307 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
I want more! Sometimes I wish we were not limited to the amount of words we could use. Very good detail, easy for me to visualize. I liked that you combined two different worlds together that one day will meet. I am big on that style of writing.
Loved how you combined two worlds into one story. Such a gripping story.
09/16/09
The contrast between their two childhoods is great. This is a well-written piece although some of the dialogue seemed a little off to me. Otherwise, though, it's a great piece.