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Just beautiful. I loved how the only catalyst from moving from fear to confidence is love. It made me contemplate what it's like to move from knowing of God to knowing God.
Very nice! It's amazing how just a few words can change us completely. I've had a moment in my life like that as well. Well done :)
09/11/09
The voice of the father's authority came through loudly. Would you have heard, "You can do this" if you had not heard, "You will do this?" Loved it.
Thank you for sharing such a heart warming story. You can accomplish so many things when you change from you will to you can. God gives each special talents and thanks to caring people a chore became a blessing.
09/17/09
What a beautiful, and beautifully written story. Thank you for sharing it with the rest of us. Congratulations on your Highly Commended status this entry so richly deserves.