The Official Writing Challenge
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09/04/09
Loved the romance! In fact, I loved everything about your story! Great writing.
09/07/09
A western romance--love the happy ending I know will becoming for the MC!
09/09/09
I so enjoy reading your writing...I think the first paragraph set the tone for "Fall" to be carried through the entire story...good job!
~Cathy~
09/09/09
I loved your story! Grabbed and kept my attention to the very end, and left a smile on my face. Would love to see it expanded into a book--so many possibilities!
09/09/09
I kept expecting something to happen to that bottle of rotgut. Oh well:) They do get married, right?
09/09/09
Some very pleasing understatement here. Likewise the humour wasn't forced but flowed smoothly. Not too sure about the relevance to Autumn, mind! You're writing well.
09/09/09
Great story. One of the best I have read this week. I just hope it had enough "fall" in it to get the points because you definitely have the gift of a good plot line.
Enjoyed this well written story. You brought the characters to life with thoughtful descriptions and dialogue.
Oh how I love westerns! Would you believe I have over 150 DVDs of western movies? Yours is my kind of entry. Are you interested in trading entries? Mine is titled "You're Gonna Lose So Why Bother?" **giggle** hehe