The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/09
Loved the unique thoughts in the last verse...it gives me a whole new perspective on trees:) and I believe everytime I see a tree changing in the fall(my favorite season) I will be thinking your lovely thoughts...your poem brings a message of hope. Thanks!
I loved your poem. Using fall as a back drop of how God not only changes trees but us as well. Beautiful, just beautiful. Thank you for such a thoughtful poem.
Wonderful poem speaking an encouraging truth. It's always good to be reminded that God is not through with us yet.
I think this topic really allowed many of us to experiment with poetry. You did a very nice job expressing your thoughts in this piece.
I enjoyed the poem so much, I went back and read it aloud. Great job!
I really like the theme of this poem.
09/10/09
What a great piece of writing. You'll place high with this one! Kudos!