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Love the descriptions in the first line!
Great story of God's redemption in the lives of your characters...your excellent descriptions of setting and characters made this a very real and believable story.
Truly a beautiful and gripping story. Only God can raise the dead and it is amazing how he goes about doing just that. The setting for your story was perfect. Thank you for such a tender and moving story.
Descriptive, you pulled me in with the first lines, and kept me to the end.
“once again he witnessed the birth of his daughter” Wow!
You drew me in immediately. What a wonderful story.
Strong characters, hard subject. You did well with this story.

You handled this with such sensitivity. I like that Mich didn't make excuses, but asked forgiveness.
What a great piece of writing. You'll place high with this one! Kudos!