The Official Writing Challenge
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09/01/09
This story is so cute! My sister had a baby last year and I remember how amazed and wonder-filled I was. A little more attention to punctuation would probably help with the flow of some of your sentences and help direct the reader. Sweet story.
09/02/09
Sweet story. All babies are blessings.
Hi, I really loved this account of the birth of Andrew. Lovely story and the poem is beautiful. Well done.