The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/05
Nice dialog. It seems like a big change in personality for one encounter. Maybe if you would just open the door a crack and let the blind girl feel hope. Just something to think about. Best wishes with this piece.
08/15/05
Nice twist at the end. Didn't see it coming.
08/16/05
Having read the end I understand the title even better. The end was unexpected and the dialogue was interesting. I think the little girl got hope.
08/18/05
You've done a wonderful job of showing what "blind faith" is really about. I didn't foresee the ending either. Great Work!
09/01/05
Alan, this was a terrific entry in the Challenge with a wonderful twist. I'm a bit late getting around to let everyone know, but I wanted to make sure you knew that you made it into the semi-finals for the Sightseeing Challenge. Be encouraged and keep rising to the Challenge! I'll look forward to seeing more from you. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)