The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/09
Your story held my attention throughout the reading. I thought of the anger in this child and wondered how he would survive the trauma of this loss. The only ray of hope was his calling out to God. This is the 'stuff' from which comes a book...
What an awesome story. My heart ached for the little boy. This was a sad and gripping story of how cruel life can be but how big our God is. Thank you for sharing.
08/30/09
This was so painful, with so much emotion in the words. Very well done.
08/30/09
I love the stream-of-consciousness effect of this story. It packs so much more emotional whallop that way. Well done and excellent take on the topic.
08/31/09
I was caught up in the intensity of this story from beginning to end. Very good writing!
08/31/09
Very riveting emotional story that keeps the readers attention throughout...great writing.