The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/09
A moving story, well written. Thank you.
08/27/09
This is a precious, surprising story. Well done.
This was such a beautiful story. I was mezmerized and my heart ached for Trace. Thank you for such a tender loving story.
08/30/09
Lovely work, well written, very touching.
08/30/09
Your writing is very good! The first half especially grabbed me. Excellent entry!
08/31/09
Yes, this is very good writing! You have an interesting story and you made me care about your characters and their circumstances.
I thought this was very captivating. I was suprised that the mother had just left, I thought she had died. I also liked the was the you did not make Trace's disability the forfront, it was just a reality. Good job!