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A very good message for us all in this busy world. Well done.
I loved this piece. It reminds me of the innocence of the boy Samuel. He could actually hear God's voice but Eli could not. Adults minds are too clutter with to do's whereas a childs mind is free and can see God's miracles and hear his voice so clearly. Thank you for sharing such a powerful message.
A great message to slow-down and see God's wonder and beauty through a child's eyes. Loved it!
Honest emotions of how we so often feel, just going through the motions. I liked the furrows in her forehead line. I could feel the tightness and tension she experienced.