The Official Writing Challenge
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It will be hard to wait for the rest of the story! I enjoyed your character descriptions. Well written.
What suspense in the grip of winter. I can hardly wait for the conclusion to this piece. I was pulled in like a moth to the light. Keep up the good work.
Yes, I agree...I want more. This is very well written and holds the readers interest Made me think of a scene from the Sound of Music.
You'll have to let us know when you post part 2. This is very good! I had quick thoughts of the "Sound of Music" and "Fiddler on the Roof," two of my favorite musicals. :)
Very, very interesting writing. I really enjoyed this and wished you had 1500 words to work with, them we may have got how it turned out.
Oozes with talent! You have done a mighty fine piece of writing!
Wow! This is a real attention "getter!" It has a feel of "The Sound of Music," and left me hungry for more!
Excellent writing and congrats on your placement. Well done.