The Official Writing Challenge
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02/02/05
Very sweet, made me feel like I was being held by a loving grandmother.
02/03/05
Anger...a flame....a consuming flame that turns into a raging inferno. Great imagery. If would could hang on to that picture of a flame out of control, we might discover we douse the anger before it really ignites.
Nice job....
This is great! I loved it. A sweet, wise, creative little poem. Well-written.
02/06/05
Good thoughts expressed well.