The Official Writing Challenge
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08/06/09
Good writing in this piece. I like how you tied the ending back to the beginning.
I really enjoyed that,I was on the stage with him!!
08/12/09
There are some great moments here. The descriptions of yougn Norman on stage are priceless and spot on.

I felt a little lost with the info on Kipling. The rhythm of the story faltered a little there, in my opinion, but you brought it back in at the end. Well done!
This is an awesome piece of writing. Well done.
Kipling's poem "If" is one of my favourites. Your Norman character was completely believable. There was in inference that his teacher had reached adulthood, but I am not sure you explained why this should be.
Sorry- I have mis-read this! obviously in need of a break!