The Official Writing Challenge
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08/06/09
Wow, what a great example of the crazy cycle of life. If this is true, I am sorry for your loss. If it is not, you are a great story teller.
This is a very good entry. true or false, well told and gripping! I liked it.
08/13/09
Your story left me speechless. I am with the others in my condolences for your loss if the story is true-life, and awestruck at your writing skill if it is fiction. Either way, congratulations on your level placement for a very well written story.
Lisa
08/13/09
Beautiful story, Paul. Congradulations.
Well done on your placing. It was well deserved.
01/17/10
Magnificent! Excellent! When you can make a reader fill up with so much emotion that they weep...You are a Writer! Absolutely terrific, and your talent of humor makes the bad parts a little easier to swallow. Great writing Pauly! I'm so proud of you...Kudos!