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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Adulthood (07/30/09)

TITLE: To My Daughter
By Margaret Villanueva
07/30/09


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Dear Emily,
I remember countless times when you were an adolescent: ďMom, why canít you treat me like an adult? Iím not a little girl any more!Ē

Those words, to me, seemed ludicrous at the time. How could you be more than my little girl? You were so full of life, full of fun, ready to take on the world and yet reluctant to clean your room, that I didnít see the adult inside the child. And yet, you had to be an adult from an early age. Your father dead, your mother working, you were forced to do much more than most girls your age. When you were 16, you were expected to do what I could not, since I was at work. And you did it, for the most part, without complaint. You kept that locked inside you, to be dealt with at a later date.

The years passed. You married a man who loves you deeply, and the two of you rushed headlong into adulthood. From college to career in one fell swoop, you were behind your husband every step of the way, giving helpful nudges when needed, and assuring him of your love and support. When he was less than successful (not due to his fault, but to the circumstances), you helped him work through the situation and find an even better place. Now you are both content and happy in northern California, where you both are blooming. And you have your own family, complete with your precious son. The three of you work together to become the close-knit family that you missed growing up. I watch you at work, at play, being a mommy and being a wife, and Iím awestruck at how grown up you are. I know that there will come a day when Michael demands that you treat him as an adult, and I hope that you think of me on that day. I hope that you realize how hard it is to give up your child to the frightening world of adulthood.

Emily, you longed to grow up, to be treated as an adult. I think that you have learned that adulthood isnít how you are treated; itís how you live. Iím thankful that youíre my daughter, and Iím thankful that you are also my friend.

I love you,
Mom


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Lisa Keck08/06/09
What a lovely letter. My mom could've written it if she were still with us. My circumstances are similar but different. Overall a very well written piece.
Victoria Beatus08/06/09
The daughter sounds like a great adult. Congrats on that if this is non-fiction. I'm "legal" and I still find the "treat me like an adult" line amusing. Thanks for writing.
Steven Mantek08/07/09
Well done! Tears in my eyes. Thank You!
Dan Blankenship 08/07/09
"I think that you have learned that adulthood isnít how you are treated; itís how you live."

So very true.

Very good work.

May God bless and keep you writing.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

Norma-Anne Hough08/13/09
Loved this letter. Shows a beautiful bond between you and your daughter, one which I share with mine.
Good entry:)