The Official Writing Challenge
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well you certainly do have the words! I really like the concept and the descriptions, I think I will read it again to real get the flavour!
Loved this! Your entry almost made me change my mind about MY FAVORITE SEASON - and put my favorite Autumn in 2nd place... after your lovely "WORDS" about Spring. That's the sign of a Good Writer! To move a reader to an emotional state of switching sides. Very Beautifully written - and loved your Title. Kudos!
You’re words were “not stuck” as you vividly described the songs, activities and colors of Spring. I loved all of the words in this piece.

You have the words and you arrayed them nicely in this piece! Great writing!
A very cleverly constructed article, with the repeated words:"If I had the words..." Well, you did have the words to put your point across. Spring has sprung in your soul and you sing the glad tidings of joy and blessing to all...God bless you...Helen