The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely poem. I liked the way your winter of despair turned into renewed hope:)
08/01/09
He turns all things to good as you did with the saddness of the poem in the beginning. Nicely done!
08/01/09
thank you. was the gap before the last two verses deliberate? I almost missed reading them on the computer screen. I enjoyed this poem
08/03/09
Your poem touched a tender spot...I have lost a sister too. Like how you ended your poem with the promise of completeness.