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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Spring (the season) (07/23/09)

TITLE: And Spring is Like....
By Allan Morelos
07/29/09


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And Spring is LikeÖ.

And spring is like a liíl girl
Whose beauty now unfurls
Emboldened by the new day
So bold with flowers play

Ah, the beauty of spring!

And spring is like a flower
Whose petals bloom with powír
Majestic in her fragrance
Bees cling and sing and dance

Hmm, the sweet scent of spring!

And spring is like a young boy
Who leaps and jumps with joy
Set free from winterís cold
With joy and strength unfold

Oh, the pure joy of spring!


And spring is like an oak tree
Whose crown spreads wide and free
So strong and so enduring
So green where birds are dwelling

Oh, the great strength of spring!

And spring is like a new mom
Whose pains and groans she mums
The babe she now delivers
Brings hope and crown forever

Ah, the relieving hope of spring!

And spring is resurrection
When allís His new creation
When death held Christ no more
The Lamb, the Lord, the Victor.

Ah, the Life and Giver of spring!


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nayiba yavala07/31/09
WOW! WOW! and more WOW!
Charla Diehl 07/31/09
Good creative imagery throughout this poem.
Marilyn Schnepp 08/01/09
Ah, the beauty, the scent, the joy, strength, hope, life and giver of Spring - for the girl, the flower, the boy, the tree, and the mom. Ah, yes, you've said it all in the resurrection of Life; in such a beautiful, poetic way...an enjoyable read with a message for us all. Lovely!
Brenda Welc08/01/09
I felt like taking a very deep breath as I was reading this magic of words melded together!
Seema Bagai 08/06/09
I enjoyed this poem. Good work.
Allan Morelos08/13/09
Glad to learn that this entry has placed seventh in the top ten of level 2 entries. Thanks for the encouragement and the lessons I can learn thru this process.