The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/09
A good peice particularly the intertwining of the poem. My one criticism is that it is almost as if the spring theme was tacked on as i think it could be about anytime of the year. A good read however .
08/01/09
Fascinating story - but what about the Spring (season)? Well, actually, Spring is known for it's new beginnings, Right? And you definitely were writing about a new beginning, like a new job, Right? So "Kudos," my friend! Nice job!
08/01/09
I like the intertwining of the "poem" into the storyline it made it very interesting and it still flowed very well.