The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/05
Prayer is definately the ultimate retreat. Whether done in a closet, the shower, or the car (as in my case. As you said, it is our weapon against evil and our source of strenght. Good piece.
08/10/05
Excellent points.
08/11/05
Good points, would make a great opening message for a church group.
08/14/05
Good points. I would like to see a bit more of your personal experience. I would limit the bible quotes to 2 or 3 that really bring home your point otherwise you risk losing reader interest. Best wishes with this piece.
This is Excellent,I believe this would be great as a devotional/meditation piece to be read in a Church service or Bible study. God bless you in your writing.