The Official Writing Challenge
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A good story here. The only suggestion I have is leaving a clue early in the story about the gender of the main character. I couldn't figure it out until paragraph five. Glad Max learned about the consequences of her actions.
Good story about two roads chosen and the consequences of both. Glad to see that the teens remained friends.
well in this one I did think the two friends were girls. so there we are. It probably depends on the reader. Thanks for writing this intersting story.
Good Story!
This story rings very true to my own heart. Thank goodness we can learn from our mistakes. Well done:)