The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/09
A good story here. The only suggestion I have is leaving a clue early in the story about the gender of the main character. I couldn't figure it out until paragraph five. Glad Max learned about the consequences of her actions.
07/25/09
Good story about two roads chosen and the consequences of both. Glad to see that the teens remained friends.
07/27/09
well in this one I did think the two friends were girls. so there we are. It probably depends on the reader. Thanks for writing this intersting story.
07/27/09
Good Story!
This story rings very true to my own heart. Thank goodness we can learn from our mistakes. Well done:)