The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 616 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
07/23/09
Thank you for sharing such a poignant story.
07/25/09
A sad story, but with hope and comfort at the end.
07/26/09
I am amazed that you managed to mix so much information, emotion and humour into such a tragic story.
07/27/09
I like your choices for words. Great story, very compelling!
Very moving and beautiful. I am totally overwhelmed with sadness.
Beautiful, it made me cry.
Diana, I almost feel the poem could stand well alone. The story is very factual, but the poem connects more on an emotional level. What do our US friends say- "show more, tell less".