The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/05
Lesson told well. Thanks for sharing.
08/11/05
Might look at paragraphing and structure, otherwise a good lesson.
08/14/05
Overall good piece. I agree with a comment above that the paragraphing (smaller) would mke this story stronger. You share a timely and inspiring message. I suggest edit and send it to a publisher.
08/14/05
sorry about misspelling make--I saw the error as I pressed the key to send it.