The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed reading this. There's nothing like retreating into God's presence!
08/10/05
Good story. A couple of grammatical errors to be fixed. (I always find mine after I submit). Thanks for sharing
08/11/05
Have some proof your work, otherwise a nice story.
08/14/05
Sounds like the perfect birthday present. Too often we get caught up in running so fast we forget how to rest. Thank you for sharing this piece. A little reworking and you've got a winner!!!