The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/09
Interesting how you show the conflicting emotions of someone not quite a child, but not quite grown yet. Loved the contrast between the "Hello Kitty" and the navel ring.
07/25/09
It is a narcissistic age of life. And you captured those feelings well, especially the way girls think!
07/27/09
Interesting,,,,VERY interesting. It's exactly like the inards of a teenager!
Good one with some lovely little insights.