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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Adolescence/Teen Years (07/16/09)

TITLE: THERE’S A TEENAGER IN MY HOUSE &
By Susan Montaperto
07/17/09


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When my daughter was a toddler,
she would wake up in the mornings
with a smile on her face that rivaled sunshine.

She would then spend the rest of the day running around
like a young and fiery comet that had lost its target site
and didn’t carry if it ever found it.

But, now she has become a teenager,
And of course, things have had to change...

FOR THERE’S A TEENAGER IN MY HOUSE &
HER MANY MOODS ARE WILD!!

Now upon awakening in the morning
instead of a smile that lit up the room
without benefit of sunshine ---
we are greeted by --
“But I don’t want to get up!!!!
Mixed with cold, stony silences…

FOR THERE’S A TEENAGER IN MY HOUSE &
HER MANY MOODS ARE WILD!!

Last year, when she turned twelve years old –
“But what do you mean that I’m not a teenager???”

On turning thirtee this year --
But I’m not thirteen until 2:35 in the afternoon.
After 2:35 P.M. --
I’m still not thirteen and I’m not a teenager!!

FOR THERE’S A TEENAGER IN MY HOUSE &
HER MANY MOODS ARE WILD!!


Her worst revelation thus far has been –
“What do you mean I have to listen to you?
But I’m a Teenager!

FOR THERE’S A TEENAGER IN MY HOUSE &
HER MANY MOODS ARE WILD!!

When choosing brassieres for the first time
at the lingerie store in Flemington –
“Why can’t I have them all in Dark Pink?
But it’s my favorite color!!

FOR THERE’S A TEENAGER IN MY HOUSE &
HER MANY MOODS ARE WILD!!


When can I have a telephone in my bedroom?
But I don’t know where my cell phone is?

FOR THERE’S A TEENAGER IN MY HOUSE &
HER MANY MOODS ARE WILD!!

I want an IPOD!
What do you mean I have to use
my allowance to pay for it?!

FOR THERE’S A TEENAGER IN MY HOUSE &
HER MANY MOODS ARE WILD!!

Okay, I’m a teenager,
But I’m not going to have any fun!!
When can I have tickets to a
Hannah Montana Concert?

FOR THERE’S A TEENAGER IN MY HOUSE &
HER MANY MOODS ARE WILD!!


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Lisa Johnson 07/23/09
Very realistic in your portrayal of a teenager.
Dee Yoder 07/25/09
Oh boy, am I ever glad that my teen has (so far) skipped most of the drama! True-to-life and humorous look at a teen girl. ( :
diana kay07/25/09
thanky you this is lovely and I can realate to that teenager tranformation! I am told it does pass eventually. Good poem :-)
Beckie Stewart07/25/09
Ah, yes,the wonder and fun of a teenage girl!!
Elaine Jane Dalton07/25/09
My mom could relate to this, I think. ;) Dalton.
Brenda Welc07/27/09
Are we living in the same house? Good writing esp. with the current topic!
Norma-Anne Hough 07/29/09
All of us mothers who have had the "dubious pleasure" of being mother to a teenager can relate to this very clever poem. Well done


   
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