The Official Writing Challenge
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good story. It brought back to me remember my summer pregnancy , glad there was a happy ending!
So true!
Great characterization of Cynthia. I can feel her misery, worry and then her joy. And love the last paragraph...excellent wrap up.
I loved this story. It bought back memories of my own pregnancy. I loved how you ended your story. Life may cause us so much pain but we have a God that said I will never leave you and that to me is money in the bank.
Well written and easy to read. Good descriptions of a wonderful event. Thanks for sharing it.
Very sweet story! I remember summer least there is AC in Florida. :) I liked the fast pace of the middle of the story.
Love this story and the atmosphere you created. Great take on the topic!
Congratulations on placing 14th in Level II. Great job!