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07/17/09
good story. It brought back to me remember my summer pregnancy , glad there was a happy ending!
07/18/09
So true!
Great characterization of Cynthia. I can feel her misery, worry and then her joy. And love the last paragraph...excellent wrap up.
I loved this story. It bought back memories of my own pregnancy. I loved how you ended your story. Life may cause us so much pain but we have a God that said I will never leave you and that to me is money in the bank.
07/21/09
Well written and easy to read. Good descriptions of a wonderful event. Thanks for sharing it.
07/22/09
Very sweet story! I remember summer pregnancies...at least there is AC in Florida. :) I liked the fast pace of the middle of the story.
07/22/09
Love this story and the atmosphere you created. Great take on the topic!
Congratulations on placing 14th in Level II. Great job!