The Official Writing Challenge
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God is the best Bible teacher! I liked this take on the topic.
07/17/09
thank you a good descriptive start that drew me into the story. I liked your description of the anxiety and panic that the MC was experincing and how the Holy spirit spoke to her through the bible. I think that the last part was unecessary as the story seemed to fininsh nicely before the break and dotted lines
07/18/09
I liked the way the MC's mom was her prayer warrior. My mom is for me and I am for my daughters. The enemy will attack us in our professional lives just as he will our spiritual lives. Those prayers give us a pyramid of protection. Good job.
Your story drew me in and I hooked. I loved it and the interaction with the mother was fantastic. My mother was my prayer warrior and we talked about everything. Thank you so much for this true to life story.
07/19/09
The beginning is well-written and an accurate description of anxiety and despair. The second half seemed to take away from the emotion and joy. Maybe some reworking and this piece will certainly minister to others.