The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/09
Where are they going?? Excellent way to end this part of your story. I definitely want to know more. You need to pay closer attention to the mechanics of your piece for correct use of periods and capitals. I liked your story.
Where were they going to for their summer outing. I loved this story but wanted more. Thank you.
Congratulations on a very clever ending to your story, leaving us all in suspense.
Loving Wales the way I do, I loved your story. Well done:)