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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Summer (the season) (07/09/09)

TITLE: rags to riches
By paras bothra
07/13/09


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Times ago their was a farmer. he was very happy with is earnings and enjoys his life. as time passed the their was drammatic changed in the climate and because of that the farming affeted. the ropen seeds where died and farmer and his family affected lot. they even don't have money to purchase their primary necessary.they sold everything they had but now even they doesn't have anythhing to sell. whatever left like their house they morgaed it and he again started his farming. he purchased the seeds, plouged them in the farm. evven his family also helped the farmer by earnings by other source and as timed passed the hardwork of farmer result in the good crop. and that make him more worthy .the moral is that hardwork,courage and moral support of the family help one to make the way from rags to riches.


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Laura Manley07/16/09
I'm not quite sure I understand where "summer" comes into play in this piece. Before you submit any entry, be sure to spell check your story. This contains numerous misspellings. I would want this brought to my attention, and for that reason, I bring it to yours. Laura
Mary McLeary07/18/09
I agree with the moral to your story. Remember, when you use a period the next word should be capitalized. You had a good idea, but you need to work on the mechanics (punctuation, spelling etc.) Keep writing because that's the way you get better.
Mildred Sheldon07/18/09
A farmer plants during the warm season and if he is diligent he can go from rags to riches. You need to check spelling,punctuation and capitalization. Otherwise good story.