The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm not quite sure I understand where "summer" comes into play in this piece. Before you submit any entry, be sure to spell check your story. This contains numerous misspellings. I would want this brought to my attention, and for that reason, I bring it to yours. Laura
I agree with the moral to your story. Remember, when you use a period the next word should be capitalized. You had a good idea, but you need to work on the mechanics (punctuation, spelling etc.) Keep writing because that's the way you get better.
A farmer plants during the warm season and if he is diligent he can go from rags to riches. You need to check spelling,punctuation and capitalization. Otherwise good story.