The Official Writing Challenge
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07/16/09
Thanks for helping me relive the days when my teenager was a little girl who loved the simpler things in life.
Nice details throughout. Well done!
07/18/09
So lovely. Gets my vote not that I have one! well done lovely descriptions and a great story.
What a wonderful story. Takes me back to my childhood days when summer held such surprises. I just loved this story.
07/22/09
This story was crafted so perfectly for the point of view of the little girl. I work with children daily and could just hear some of my girls' voices in this. Beautifully realized idea!