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Wow, well done. I think you should move to advanced. :-) You brought the fear and reality of those days alive--and then showed us the peace that passes understanding. Thank you.
EXCELLENT! Extremely well written and moving.
Wow is right! Powerful stuff. Your title attracted me and your writing drew me in. You have talent. Keep at it! I sense an invitation to the advanced level in your near future. God Bless!
Wonderful job! God can give us peace in the middle of the worst situations. You developed that idea dramatically. Fantastic writing. Keep it up.
This was so good!! I loved it!
Awesome writing! I enjoyed this so much! You are very talented. May God bless you!
Very well written, in the style of C. Ozick ("The Shawl"). Move this up a level. You have a flair for detail in description. Thank you.
A wonderful work. How poignant that she should retreat to the Lord Jesus in those waning moments of life. I agree; move on up to the next level of the challenge!
All of the above. Your choice of language is incredible! Well told, with the tension mounting throughout, but concluding with a sense of peace. Beautiful!
Incredible...or should I say it reads extremely credible. Powerful images that we all need to be reminded of, thank you.