The Official Writing Challenge
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07/16/09
Personification... an interesting angle to take on the presentation... I liked it quite alot.
Lisa
Very clever. At times I thought a real person was being referred to. Good job!
This was a clever approach to the topic. Like the way to show the likes and dislikes of the seasons. Mine favorite by far is the Spring for many of the reasons you mentioned.
07/17/09
Absolutely ingenious in the way you have presented this story on the topic of "Summer!" Laura
What a novel approach on the subject of summer. Loved it and enjoyed reading this very interesting take on Genesis. Thank you so much.
A very entertaining way to explain the seasons and their many differences.

Susan Montaperto
07/19/09
Excellent! Your talent and creativity shine in this piece.
07/22/09
Cute story! I personally thought the repetition of the name Summer was a little distracting toward the end, but otherwise it was an excellent and original piece.