The Official Writing Challenge
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07/09/09
Good meter,good rhyme, great message. Love the poem.

Nice poetry
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this well written poem. Thank you for sharing.
07/11/09
The bittersweet memories of two lives led together is well portrayed in this wonderful poem! Very sweet and honest.
Very sweet poem. Well done.
07/14/09
sweet poem sounds like it should be set to music!
Congratulations on your placing! Great job.