The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting ...
I loved the title of this story. So true regardless of circumstances. Faith is our strenght.
Very sad account of something that happens all too often these days. Well done.
07/14/09
This is mysterious and intriguing. I really think it could be expanded into a good story of suspense...I just HOPE it ends well. Please?!
07/15/09
I found this interesting, but would have liked more background information about Rufus and why he was in prison.

Editing or proof reading would make this a great piece. There were a number of typos and missing punctuation. Happens to every writer from time to time. Good story--keep on writing.