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Topic: Twilight Years of Life (07/02/09)
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By Judee Dufresne
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You have an excellent way with words, but this could use a couple paragraph breaks and a little tweaking.
Also it would be nice to see each thought expanded, rather than just a line or two. Don't take this to the bank; I'm a beginner.
What great insight you have.
Keep these coming.
Blessings,
Patty