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Nice story. Good illustration
I loved the idea of a treasure list. This was very enjoyable.
Encouraging to read how grandchildren accept Jesus. I hope to some day see my grandchildren do the same.
Great entry. Really enjoyed this and easily identified with all your emotions. Being in that age category:)
What a wonderful story! I like the idea of keeping a Treasure List in your twilight years. My most favorite part of your story was when your grandson told you that he had taken Jesus into his heart the night before. You are so right to think that first, we see our children accept Jesus and then our precious grandchildren. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. By the way, second quotation marks are always after the punctuation. I find this in practically every entry I read.
Loved the idea of your treasure list--your story moved along at a nice pace and held my interest all the way through. Good job.