The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent writing describing the mc's emotions with the task at hand. Though there's sadness, the house may be enjoyed again.
good description of the hosue and the life it had been full of, the emptyness of the loss of her sister and the empty house echo one another and the hope that it will be filled again and enjoyed by another family
I really enjoyed the writing style, the flow, the emotions, and especially, "the room where the sadness was waiting for me." You've portrayed a slice of real ity. I appreciate that the MC took the time to respect the relationship by allowing herself to feel.
WOW! Loved this so much. Memories of lost ones turn from saddness to sweetness. Keep up the good work. Exceptional.
I'm especially blessed to have two sisters I adore...this story touched my heartstrings. Keep up the wonderful writing!
Beautiful portrayal of a tender moment. Vivid description and emotion. Well done!
Picture perfect descriptions brought me right into the house and brought me to tears. I hope the family living there now is enjoying fresh squeezed lemonade from those big, sweet lemons! This is so beautifully written. Thank you for writing it!