The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this so much. It followed life of two people from beginning to end. What a clever way to express life. Thank you.
06/14/09
Powerfully written. I think I would have liked a hint at the end that it doesn't have to be this way, or at least, that there is a Way back. But you certainly portrayed the pain of SO many people's broken dreams. Well done.