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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Empty and Full (06/04/09)

TITLE: Yellow Dandelion
By Deborah Caruso
06/10/09


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The yellow Dandelion
Sitting in the meadow, does not stand a lone.

Is the glass half empty, or half full
Tis asked of the drinking glasses

Is the eye evil, or the eye single
Tis asked of the soul’s glasses

The eyes are the heart’s windows
Shall be stained glass or tainted

If stained glass, the light shall invade
All the shadowy intrusions of this world’s shade

As the dandelion seeds go swirling and circulating,
Words do too, some liberating, others strangulating

So the eyes must be trained to behold
And discern between goodwill and gold

Keeping in mind, that as the yellow dandelion
Was first dandelion snow

That God’s Word of truth too,
Will produce more than purest gold

And whenever our wandering eye’s roam
Understand that this is truth’s utmost foe

So through our eyes, see Father’s hand
And believe He knows the grand scheme of all things

And as the yellow Dandelion
Sitting in the meadow, does not stand a lone
Nor do we, who look upon God.


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diana kay06/13/09
well I read it several times but I am still confused! I am not sure if this is just me or that your subject matter is not clear, either way this reader is left unsettled!
Mildred Sheldon06/14/09
So true about dandelions not standing alone. The seeds are spread by the wind just like us. God is awesome and it is He who fills our cups. Loved this so much. Thanks for sharing.