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Very astute how you faded the story from scenes full of life to one of death. I kept waiting for someone to save her even after I finished reading. But I expect that's how those left behind to deal with it feel. Well done.
Great descriptions and a surprise ending. Good job.
Well written and truly so sad. I would have loved it if Susie had lived. Depression can and does kill. Thanks for sharing.
You have a lovely way with words, I especially liked the phrase about reluctant feet..having had six weeks in sandals. Theses displays don't allow me to see for a full quote.

It was a less-than-obvious take on the title empty and full, which made it all the more poignant in its conclusion. Nice work.

I am so sorry for your pain and applaud your courage in the writing of this article for all to share.
heartsafield, Laurie M. Gagne