The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/05
Nice flow.
08/10/05
Very nice.
08/11/05
Okay, some good work here. Thanks.
08/11/05
I think it's lovely that you've been writing since the age of 10.
08/11/05
Wonderful :)
How charming! I enjoyed this!
08/12/05
Sweet poem. Try to get your last lines of each stanza to have the same number of syllables.
Lovely poem. I enjoyed this although not normally a poetry lover. Thanks for sharing in this way. Well done!
08/14/05
I can just picture it - beautiful - thanks.