The Official Writing Challenge
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Your writing is colourful and dreamy just like Cassie!

One caution - be wary of using so many descriptive words and phrases in one sentence that the thread of your story gets lost.

You painted a lovely picture with words.
06/12/09
some lovely descriptions
Oh the innocence of childhood. So descriptive and captivating. A child shall lead. Thanks you for such a story.
06/13/09
Sometimes we are cautioned to not overdo descriptions. But, in your story the descriptions play such an important role in allowing the reader to be there. I truly loved it.
Mona
06/15/09
Such a sweet story. And a good way of subtly following the topic.