The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/09
How true it is that the raven draws us away from Good so subtly that we don't know it until we're lost in the dark. But thank you, Jesus, that you are always there to rescue us when we are lost! Thanks for writing this.
06/13/09
So very true of life. This was so poignant that is tore my heart and I felt her pain. Thanks for sharing. This was beautifully written.
06/15/09
Good job. You might wish to take a second look at your sentence structure, but this is a good story. You do a good job of not coming right out and saying how your entry relates to the topic. God bless you as you keep on going.