The Official Writing Challenge
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06/04/09
Reminds me of being on my knees telling God I knew I couldn't pick 'em and it was up to Him, but ONLY if it was His will. You captured first date hopes, fears and anxiety perfectly.
06/04/09
What a Hoot! Loved It! Thanks for sharing your fun "First Date" thoughts in rhyme.
06/06/09
interesting to read this right through and find how it progressed. Some of your rhyming and metre was a bit out and so those final lines of each verse didnt always work on reading out loud (as I always think poetry should be!)
I also wondered about the title "first date" as clearly this person had been around the block a few times "another first date" or "first date- yet again" would perhaps work better!
06/08/09
I truly enjoyed your poem. It was a hoot. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing and God bless and keep you.