The Official Writing Challenge
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06/04/09
Beautiful poem--I love the meter, the rhymes, the images, the message.

FYI--the phrase is 'bated breath'. It's short for 'abated', meaning that one has held one's breath in anticipation.

Thanks for this reminder of our blessings!
06/04/09
Blessings indeed.
06/06/09
Amazing!
06/09/09
Beautiful, heartfelt and real.