The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/05
Very sweet and thought provoking. Double spaces would ease reading between paragraphs.
08/11/05
Work on readability. Interesting story, with edit could be very meaningful.
I understand. Now I'm on the other side of the fence facing the empty nest! You might want to separate your paragraphs for easier reading.