The Official Writing Challenge
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06/04/09
I like the rustic voice, absolutely right for the setting.

In the first paragraph, you're both afraid of the storm and not afraid of the storm.

Isn't it wonderful how God turns sorrow into gladness?
06/04/09
Life's adversity resulting in God's better plan for lives was well portrayed.
06/04/09
A good well written peice.Thank you
Well done. I am so relieved that what could have remained a tragedy of natural circumstances, turned into a sweet awakening of the spirit and soul, praise the Lord. Great job in your believable setting and dialogue. I relaly liked this one. I didn't get mine done in time to send it in for this challenge,sigh.I hope you do well on this as it it is really good. :0)