The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/09
Wonderful, wonderful irony.

The most common error here was one of punctuation of dialogue. If you'd like to PM me, I'll be glad to go over that with you.

The punctuation issue asside, this was very delightful, and I enjoyed reading it very much.
06/01/09
Boy, we saints really know how to ruin God's message, don't we? And we often can't even see ourselves doing it! Love the humor in this story!